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Im writing a college essay and Im not sure how to edit the first paragraph
My existence thus far has been a musical performance.
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can someone help me edit this
My Song My existence thus far has been a musical performance. The world is my stage, the platform
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I need help editing a college admission writing supplement
Connecticut College is definitely my first choice, as I believe that
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I need help editing a college admission writing supplement
Connecticut College is definitely my first choice, as I believe that
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can someone edit this
Connecticut College is easily my prime choice, as I believe that its exemplary academic and career
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Is there any way to edit or improve this?
Community Service Description Grades(s) Hrs/wk wk/yr BuildOn Raised $2,000 through
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I have a 2.68 GPA. I know its bad, but this was mainly due to my mother dying freshman year and my fathers debilitating state
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can someone edit my college essay? I was told by an admissions counselor to write a supplement describing my low cumulative GPA.
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Can someone edit this
Dear Admissions, I was pleased to find that the University of Connecticut allowed for applicants to submit
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can someone help edit this? I literally need this in by tonight
Dear Admissions, As I was recently speaking with an admissions
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can someone edit this. also, does it sound too melodramatic?
And so, dear reader, I am no longer a child. I was unable to
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What has the real GDP for the US been like for the past 10 years, and what does this mean for the economic health of the nation?
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what is it too wordy?
I did, I edited my entire essay, Im just trying to explain to admissions my point of view
never mind mind I figured it out
and if so, would I just say; Dear Director of Admissions, Lee H. Melvin, or would I just put dear Lee H. Melvin,
is the director of admissions the same as a dean of admssions?
I am my truest and purest self, a mere child embarking on the beginning of life. So, how can it be that my mother, my main source of comfort, can possibly be dying? Stage 4 Metastases Melanoma Cancer: the doctor says is the grim diagnosis, the definite
Im trying to say that I was like a hollow shell. I don't know Im trying to make the essay developed and stand out to the admissions officers, while also not making it overdone or overly complicated.
I entered a callous shell of myself,and once again allowed my obstacles overtake my life.
also is it that im writing too much in general or is it the vocab?
so should I make it shorter?
I know its definitely a reach school but as far as the essay goes, basically I should just write an essay about what happened freshan and sophmore year and how I grew from it? do you have any other advice on how to write it?
do any of you think I have a chance?
no the admissions counselor gave me an email to send the writing supplement to, so its not sent through the common app. She said it can be as "long as it takes to tell my story" and there really isnt a minimum sat requirement, but they only look at reading
I know Uconns competitive but its definitely my first choice school, so Im trying to do everything I can to increase my chances of getting in. My cumulative GPA is under the 3.33 that they look for, but now its at a 3.77 so Im hoping they see that and
Uconn and Ill probolaly also send it i as a writing supplement to Fairfield University
should I write it like a story or more like an essay that I would write in school? Also, I don't know if you give college advice or not, but do you think I have a chance for being admitted?
what should be the main focus of the essay? Im obviously going to write about my mom, but im confused on how to structure it and how exactly to write it. It just seems confusing to me on how Im supposed to write an impacting and honest story while also
so how long do you think it should approximately be? im not sure whether I should be writing a 5 pg narrative or a short essay. also, do you give college advice?
Can you give me any advice on writing the essay
other than that do you think it could improved at all
where is it wordy to you
its for a college and will be sent electronically. Is it developed enough?Is there anything that sounds wrong or that needs to be elaborated on?
(The Holleran Center for Community Action and Public Policy offers student teaching internships and other career preparing programs) Connecticut College is easily my prime choice, as I believe that its exemplary academic and career opportunities will not
take your name off anonymous and try to talk to me again... seriously get a life
is there anything else wrong with it?
